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Synthesizing Sources

EWRT 1A Paper #2 – Synthesizing

Also: Quoting, paraphrasing, and summarizing
long way gone:

Written in class on Monday, October 15

Content:  By now you should have finished A Long Way Gone and gone through at least four of the interviews with Ishmael Beah or his American mother.  Your task is to synthesize those sources, focusing on the points which seem most interesting and significant to you.  Your thesis should have "I" or "me" in it to emphasize that you personally connected to the points Beah made.

  • Choose three or four separate points which Beah makes in his interviews: the lessons he has learned which he wants to convey to his American audience. 
  • For each point, find examples (one, two, or three per point) in the book which could serve as illustrations of those points.
    •  QUOTE  (Hacker 414-20, 597-606) the interview points, and then practice paraphrasing (576-9), summarizing (474-5), and quoting the examples from the book which you see as supporting Beah’s point. If you would like to add a personal experience that supports his point, great!
  • For one point, find examples (one, two, or three) in the book which might contradict or make you question his point. This point could be the same point as above, but it just happens that the book shows both sides of that point.
    •  QUOTE the interview point, and then practice paraphrasing, summarizing, and/or quoting the examples from the book which you see as contradicting Beah’s point. If you would like to add personal experience that contradicts his point, great!
  • Turn this material into an organized essay in which you show how Beah, looking back at his experiences while being interviewed, distills that experience into life lessons which he hopes to convey to his audience.  On the other hand, what material in the book makes you question a point from an interview? 
Form:Your paper should be about three (or more) computer-printed pages.  It should conclude with a Works Cited list (which you may bring to class already completed).

 When you finish, after you have proofread for errors in spelling, grammar, and quoting, print it out, then, in pen, in the margins, mark Q for quotes, P for paraphrases, and S for summaries. I expect to see at least three Q’s, at least one P, and at least one S.


Grading: 80 points possible.  30 points for excellent synthesis – connecting points from the interviews with examples from the book.  20 points for excellent and correct use of quotes, paraphrases, and summary(ies).  15 points for grammar and clarity (spelling does not count).  15 points for organization, style and originality. 

 Updated Friday, October 12, 2007 at 10:43:48 AM by Marilyn Patton - pattonmarilyn@fhda.edu
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